The link to my pitch:
https://youtu.be/0JtI8U51-n4
The feedback I received on my last pitch was that I needed to vocalize more and try to make my words clearer. I also got the feedback that I need to do more with my hands. There were some points in my pitch where my hands holding each other and I tried to improve on that. I did also tied my tie better this time and looked more professional. I think the most important thing I still need to improve on is speaking louder and making my words clearer.
Isaac I think you did a good job of vocalizing your thoughts and ideas for the pitch. I did notice your hands in your previous pitches and have also seen a positive change in that regard. You were clearer this time and you look a lot sharper. Overall I enjoyed your pitch and can't wait to see more of you. Good man!
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